Chemistry -Toned- Page 2

EDIT: Now with tones! I tried to do some effect tones, and really tried to get a feel for what I was doing here... I like the way it's come out personally, and feel it looks soooo much better than the untoned version. Lets see what you guys have to say, though ^_^
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A little mini project for the gomanga.com forums

Grab a base plot, and make a personal interpetation of it! Here's what it was:

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The Event:

An after-school meeting between a shy girl and the guy she admires.

Characters:

1) Shy Girl (Any school age, take your pick!)
2) Handsome Guy (Similiar age to Girl, they go to the same school)
3) Nosey Teacher (Optional: He/She could come in and break up this little meeting, for an easy ending)

Plot Frame:

--The boy shows up with a note he recieved in his locker. Across the way, he sees a single girl standing in the evening light. She walks over to him slowly, and begins to confess her feelings for him. Just then, when she finally has the courage to speak the words, a teacher is heard, screaming "What are you two doing here so late? It's time to go home!", or something to that effect. The pair split ways, both now uneasy about what just transpired.

Suggested Page Length:
-- maximum of 5 pages
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Mine totals 4 pages. Here's page 2!

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